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/clear-speak — Plain-language rewriting

Point it at any writing — a doc, a command file, an issue draft, a commit message, a README paragraph — and it replaces the jargon with words a non-engineer can follow on the first read.

/clear-speak is also stride's canonical standard for what counts as jargon. /linear:plan-work links to it for issue titles, and /linear:finish links to it when explaining a Vision trace in plain English. As a rule it keeps new output plain; as a tool it fixes text that has already drifted.

The test

Can someone understand this without a dictionary or a degree?

If not, find simpler words. The stricter version: if a 16-year-old wouldn't understand it, rewrite it.

How it works

  1. Spot the jargon — Latin and Greek roots, -tion/-ment/-ism nouns, abstract compounds, bare code identifiers dropped into prose, and any word you'd never say out loud
  2. Ask the replacement question — "how would I explain this to a smart friend who doesn't know this field?" The answer is usually the rewrite
  3. Apply the transformation — swap the fancy word for the plain one, and turn actions hiding inside nouns back into verbs

Quick transformations

JargonClear speak
migrate_from_legacy()The step that upgrades your old settings file
Dead codeCode nothing uses anymore
Parse-before-delete guardCheck the file before deleting it
Idempotent installSafe to run twice
Deterministic orderingAlways comes out in the same order
Silent no-opQuietly does nothing
Completeness auditGap check
Architectural analysisMap the shape
FacilitateHelp with

When to use

  • Cleaning up a doc, command file, or reference before it ships
  • Naming a function, concept, or heading so it reads plainly
  • Sharpening an issue title or description into a plain outcome
  • Rewriting a commit body so a non-engineer can follow what changed
  • Any time writing slips into fancy words

What it doesn't do

Keep the precise term, add the plain gloss — never strip the precise word.

A technical term earns its place when it is genuinely precise, when the audience expects it, or when simplifying would lose meaning. For a load-bearing term like atomic commit, give it a one-line plain explanation the first time, then use it freely. Clear speak is not dumbing down — it is thinking the idea through until you can say it simply.

Quality check

After a rewrite, four checks:

  • The 16-year-old test — would a smart 16-year-old understand this?
  • The conversation test — would you say this out loud to a friend?
  • The speed test — can readers understand it on the first read?
  • The meaning test — did you preserve what it actually said?

Source

Built on George Orwell's six rules for writing, plus two supporting references shipped with the skill: writing clearly, simply, and with action; and plain headings with precise vocabulary inside.